Second Verse Review — Is It Worth Reading?

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Verdict: A funny, heartfelt second-chance romance: teenage sweethearts Poppy, a musician, and Norah, an artist, split when Poppy left without explanation for pop stardom; twenty years later, both parents, they meet at the school gates and discover their kids are best friends. Readers love West’s humour, the everyday realism and a truly hateful villain; some found the central secret thin and the ending rushed.

Best for: Readers who want a warm, witty British second-chance romance with kids and school-gate chaos.

Heat level: 🌶️🌶️

Rating: ★★★★☆ (3.8/5 — a 4.12 Goodreads average across 490 ratings, 3.58 on StoryGraph from 48 reviews, and 4.4 stars across 603 Amazon ratings)

Tropes: Second chance, friends to lovers, teen sweethearts, single parents, dual timeline, rom-com.

Second Verse is Natasha West’s 2024 contemporary lesbian romance. As teenagers, musician Poppy and artist Norah were glued at the hip, until their friendship became a whirlwind romance and Poppy suddenly pulled the plug, leaving Norah heartbroken and in the dark.

It holds a 4.12 average across 490 Goodreads ratings, with 77% of them four or five stars, 3.58 on StoryGraph from 48 reviews, and 4.4 stars across 603 Amazon ratings.

What Is Second Verse About?

With a secret she could not share, Poppy hit the road to pop stardom. Twenty years on, she has retired from an embarrassing career as a cheesy pop star, and Norah has given up on her artistic dreams. Both are now parents, and strangers.

Then they bump into each other at the school gates and learn their kids are best friends. Between playdates, bake sales and parties, old sparks fly, and they have to confront the mystery of why they were torn apart.

What Works in This Book

  • Humour: Readers call it laugh-out-loud funny, with wit that survives even the sad parts.
  • Real life: Fans say West’s characters and situations feel plucked from anyone’s day to day.
  • The structure: Alternating POVs and then-and-now chapters give a fuller picture of the relationship.
  • The villain: One interfering mother has readers wanting to throw things.

Book Synopsis

A washed-up pop star back home. The girl she left behind twenty years ago.

Their kids have already become best friends.

My Review

West’s strength is how real her characters feel; one reader describes the interactions as excruciatingly real, like a portrait of everyday life. Norah, pushed by a controlling mother into a business degree and a marriage instead of art college, and Poppy, pushed into a pop career she never wanted, are easy to root for. Readers praise the balance of humour and seriousness, with sensitive topics handled well and the teenage scenes shy but genuine. One reader was so absorbed she thought she was a third of the way through when she was nearly at the end.

Second Verse by Natasha West book cover

Critics point to the premise resting on a miscommunication, a reason for the separation that felt weak to a couple of readers, and an ending that felt rushed or lost the thread. One found the characters lacking depth and chemistry, another wanted the book to be longer, and one was put off by some cultural details and slang.

My honest note: A sweet, funny Kindle Unlimited second chance.

ElementIn Second Verse
Central relationshipPoppy (retired pop star, parent) & Norah (former artist, parent)
Core tropesSecond chance, teen sweethearts, dual timeline
SettingPoppy’s hometown, where both now live
Heat level🌶️🌶️
Length278 pages (Kindle edition)
SeriesStandalone
Content notesControlling and manipulative parents

How Spicy Is Second Verse?

Low to moderate. One reader counts two or three scenes; another felt the chemistry deserved more steam.

Readers mention controlling, manipulative parents and a heavier emotional thread beneath the comedy.

Who Should Read This Book?

You’ll likely love it if: you want a British second-chance romance with parents and kids. It is on our single mom lesbian romance list.

You may want to skip it if: miscommunication plots frustrate you.

In short: Old flames, school gates, big laughs.

What Readers Are Actually Saying (September 2026)

On Goodreads the split is 40% five stars, 37% four, 20% three, 4% two and almost no one-star ratings.

Why readers love it (according to the discourse): Humour first. Second, realism. Third, the dual timeline. Fourth, the villain.

What readers argue about and complain about: The miscommunication, above everything. Second, the rushed ending. Third, depth and heat.

The comparison worth making first: West’s The Rise and Fall and Rise Again of Clara Wild, another story of a former pop star.

Frequently Asked Questions

Is Second Verse told in two timelines?

Yes. Chapters alternate between Poppy’s and Norah’s points of view, and the first half moves between the present and their teenage relationship twenty years earlier. Readers found the flashbacks added backstory without clumsiness.

Why did Poppy leave Norah?

That is the book’s central mystery, and it involves an interfering parent. Some readers found the reason convincing and moving; a couple found it weak for the drama it causes.

How spicy is Second Verse?

Low to moderate. One reader counts two or three scenes, and another wished it were steamier.

Is there a villain?

Yes. A manipulative mother is the character readers most love to hate.

Is Second Verse on Kindle Unlimited?

Yes, when we checked, or $4.99 to buy on Kindle.

If You Loved Second Verse, Read These Next

Try The Rise and Fall and Rise Again of Clara Wild or the London rom-com Made in London. Browse our single mom list or the full Book Reviews archive.

The Bottom Line

Second Verse sets out to be a funny, tender second-chance romance, and West’s humour and real-life characters deliver. What holds it back is a secret and an ending that some found thin. An easy, satisfying Kindle Unlimited pick. Check Second Verse on Amazon →

The Eikna Overall Ranking

On the Eikna scale, Second Verse ranks as a good single-mom pick — funny, heartfelt.

The Evidence Scorecard

Overall ★★★★☆ 3.8/5

  • ✓ 4.12 average across 490 Goodreads ratings
  • ✓ 77% of Goodreads ratings are four or five stars
  • ✓ 3.58 on StoryGraph from 48 reviews
  • ✓ 4.4 stars across 603 Amazon ratings

Romance ★★★★☆ 3.6/5

  • ✓ Second chance
  • ✓ Teen sweethearts
  • ✓ Miscommunication
  • ✓ Chemistry debated

Characters ★★★★☆ 3.8/5

  • ✓ Poppy
  • ✓ Norah
  • ✓ Best-friend kids
  • ✓ Hateful villain

Writing ★★★★☆ 3.8/5

  • ✓ Funny
  • ✓ Dual timeline
  • ✓ Realistic
  • ✓ Rushed ending for some

Emotional Impact ★★★★☆ 3.7/5

  • ✓ Heartbreak
  • ✓ Controlling parents
  • ✓ Hopeful
  • ✓ Heavy at times

Heat Level ★★☆☆☆ 2/5

  • ✓ Two or three scenes
  • ✓ Low spice
  • ✓ Wished steamier
  • ✓ Adult

Ending ★★★★☆ 3.5/5

  • ✓ HEA
  • ✓ Rushed for some
  • ✓ Satisfying
  • ✓ Standalone

Re-read Value ★★★★☆ 3.7/5

  • ✓ On Kindle Unlimited
  • ✓ $4.99 Kindle price
  • ✓ 278 pages
  • ✓ Easy read

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